Tag: Writing

Character Development

If you keep up with both of my blogs, you will see a trend for today’s topic of choice. I’m talking about characters! They can make us laugh or cry, angry or happy and sometimes they do it only with words on a page. Also actors have been incredibly good in the past few years at developing characters on screen. I want to share with you my favourite moment of character development and why I believe it to be a good example. I would also like to mention a few of the methods I use when I grow a character and which “type” I prefer personally!

Now first off I want to talk about one movie in particular that blew everyone away in recent years. The acting, screen play and directing were phenomenal and one of the characters was played perfectly while another developed so masterfully it was only overshadowed by the other’s performance. In “The Dark Knight” we watched as Heath Ledger left us with the performance of a lifetime. Nearly unrecognisable, Ledger managed to capture the insanity and lunacy of the Joker while preserving the dark side of the film and I thank him for the performance. However, I believe had Ledger not died the lime light would point to Aaron Eckhart who took on the role of Harvey Dent and then Two-Face as his character progressed throughout the film.

Eckhart had my favourite route of character progression from champion to villain as he succumbed to the madness of the world around him. Calm, confident and charming, Eckhart portrayed Harvey Dent as the future for Gotham City and a shining example at that. The world surrounding Dent is one of corruption and bribery, one that begins to take its toll on the city’s knight in shining armor. We see Dent starting to lose his cool as he interrogates a man by flipping a coin to whether or not he will shoot the man. We know the coin is double sided, but it shows how increasingly frustrated he is becoming. Finally the Joker manages to set Dent off balance by forcing Batman to make a choice between Dent and Dent’s girlfriend who is also Batman’s love interest. As Dent loses his girlfriend and half his face to the Joker, his condition worsens and finally he lets the evil take over.

Assuming the role of Two-Face, Harvey Dent then begins enacting revenge on those who had a hand in his disfiguration and the death of his girlfriend. He chooses who to attack, but lets his now scarred coin decided whether they live or die. In many of the scenes I get the chills watching him flip the coin as he allows fate to decide for him. He holds true to it, not killing one of the female officers involved proving he is true to his word. I truly believe Eckhart should have been given way more credit than he received.

So that was one incredible transformation from recent memory, but not all developments are as epic or notable. For me in my short stories I do not plan how my characters develop. In short fiction I write a page at a time with an idea in mind. After each page, I reread what I have already written and see if I still wish to continue in that direction. Sometimes from beginning to end the characters I intended for a purpose switch allegiance and become something different, much like Harvey Dent. For me in longer fiction, I prefer much more subtle changes, so that eventually you haven’t realized they changed at all but eventually everything piles up.

I quite love the underdog characters, and the characters who switch sides unpredictably. These characters have the ability to flip a story in any direction. The underdog can lose a war, only to win it in the end, but these loveable characters are cheered for in many movies. Cinderella Man, Rudy, Terminator… (Ok not Terminator, but it was definitely getting too serious in here) are shining examples of the underdog character. The switching type character has been seen in many movies and television shows, one of the most famous is Darth Vader. Started off as a Jedi, turned to the dark side for a very long time and then in the end, returned to the side of the Jedi. Whatever the case these all have great character development (although Star Wars has many cheesy lines in the early days of Anakin) and prove to be among the most popular of character development choices.

It’s hard to break away from the clichés, and the types as you write. You will find most situations have been covered at one point or another. The challenge for modern writers is the same as it always has been, but it does get tougher with more writers adding their stories to the sea of creativity. However how many times has someone written about a boy wizard, until J.K. Rowling managed to meet with incredible success? I suppose what I am trying to say is if you are a writer out there, and it may have been completed a thousand times, develop your characters however you wish and write the stories you want to write. As a writer I don’t get down by a story being similar to mine, instead it empowers me. it should push you to get your stories out there more than ever before because it means that someone else liked your idea! So get out there and write!

Blog of Writing +1: The Expansion

So after updating earlier I realized my posts were coming through in the past! As I want to continually post every single day I realized there was a gap in my posts! It was all because my time zone was set to Alberta, Canada instead of New South Wales, Australia. But that being said, I knew I’d be reposting today which is why yesterday’s post was short. But all that aside, it’s story time!

Fallen Skies (Click Here to read it!) is the short story I worked on for the past seven days and managed to write just over ten pages. The story follows Damien, a newly wed visiting New York with his wife Alison. Even before they can touch down, demons begin pouring from the underworld and try to take the city. All that stands in the way of the demons is a secret chapter of the Knights Templar who manage to save Damien and take him in. He doesn’t find his wife and is told that he was one of a few survivors who made it to the Templar Bunker. As time passes, Damien is knighted by the Templars and taught to lead their knights into battle. As the last gang in the city push the Knights Templar from the streets, the war with the demons intensifies and Damien is thrust into training scouts. As the past begins to catch up with him, Damien finds himself trying to unite the gang and the Templars in hopes they can force the demon threat back once and for all.

The email link is up and running so if anyone out there would like to send me feedback feel free! The plan for this upcoming week is as follows:

IGN Blog Post per day
Blog Post here per day
Convert Story to Script
Write another short story

So be sure to check out my new story on the right side under Creative Endeavours and be sure to check in starting tomorrow as I’m going to try something new with the writing blog. Daily writing activity? Perhaps! Only time will tell!

Blog of Writing +1

You’ll notice today I have made a number of adjustments to the website! From sharing me on Facebook and Twitter, to checking to make sure I have posted every day, check the right hand side to see what I’ve added! If anyone comes here and has any suggestions or things they’d like to see added to the side bar let me know! If you’re kind enough to swing by, the least I can do is be accommodating.

Story Update: My short story should be posted tonight before I sleep, so some people may find it posted tomorrow. The story has some decent characters and dialogue, I just hope it holds up. I don’t really plan what I’m writing, I just sit down, reread the last bit and then blow through until I feel I can’t write any more or I’m satisfied with what I’ve written. The story will be added to my Creative Endeavours links on the right hand side. It will be entitled “Fallen Skies”. I really would love some feedback on it, so feel free to message me or I’ll get an email posted up on here somehow.

Anyway thanks to everyone who has been coming to this website for the past while, I really have some big plans for the future. Short stories per week, script writing and some other things as we get closer to Christmas! For now I need to run and finish a certain short story! I’ll post again in a little bit!

Hooked worse than Peter Pan

It’s been feeling invigorating to get back into writing! Just to give everyone a little idea of how much writing I’ve been doing per day, it’s easily been over two thousand words! Now this week is my first full week of writing like a madman so thanks to everyone who sticks with me (Including my lovely girlfriend, thanks for your support and patience)! I feel like the words just pour out of me while I’m writing lately, which has lead me to get organized and start a little bit of planning. This week I have a few personal goals, and I have to remain constant! I won’t sleep until I accomplish my daily goals! Stay tuned to this blog for the following wild features:

1) A daily basic blog post on this website following my writing exploits: both trials and tribulations.
2) A game themed post over on the IGN website. I’ve been alternating between one serious and one fluff post per day.
3) I’ve decided to go hard or go home, back onto the creative scene with an attempt at one short story per week. I’m going to try hard to do a minimum of one page per day, not published online until Saturday.

If I write two thousand words per day, every single day of the week… In about five and a half weeks I’ll have written as many words as J.K. Rowling wrote about a certain boy wizard’s first year at Hogwart’s. I wish I had some advice from her on how to write a full novel, I’ve got the drive and the passion, but I’m as disorganised as… well, nothing is more disorganized as me! I free write entire short stories with no plot, no structure, sadly it’s fun for me and probably not the best read. I’ve read a few books on the subject, but sometimes you just need an exercise on the topic. Strange that I went to university for Computer Programming, followed by 3D Animation because I wanted a job where I could make money while trying to break into writing in my free time. Sad that I would probably be making more money if I’d have gone through university for writing. If anyone knows of any decent guides or a direction I could be put in to help myself get structure, feel free to let me know.

End game, I would love to write either creatively for myself or a game company, or failing that I definitely wouldn’t mind reviewing virtually any media (film, music, apps, games, etc…) The dream job I used to want was designing for games, I love math, puzzles, writing and interactive media. I also really love the way games can make you feel emotions much like films but it hits you harder knowing that in some cases you affected the outcome. Sadly for now, I have to try and make some money for bills so here’s to hoping I can start earning money in Australia! Thanks for tuning into “ye ole writing blog” once more, hope to catch you tomorrow!

New Links – Creative Endeavors

Another day, more writing! I’d like to thank everyone once again for stopping by whether you stumbled upon my little site here or facebook caught your attention. Either way I could barely sleep last night I was so excited to write more! It’s definitely more motivating knowing people actually may read what you’ve written!

Now that we’ve passed that, I’d like to redirect you to two of my short stories on the right side of the page. I’ve been writing on and off for quite some time and these are both products of me bunkering down and actually finishing a story. They’re a few months old, however I think they do represent where I stand as a creative writer at this point in time. Hopefully the short summaries below will urge you to read and hopefully enjoy them!

The Runner was something actually that was inspired from the video game Mirror’s Edge by Electronic Arts. I was trying to consider how to write an action packed short story and decided to give it a go. The story’s background is rooted in a society in which Parkour Couriers are the main means of delivery within a city. Considered by most to be of an urban ninja type, these Couriers are used both commercially and underground. Tracked via GPS and guided by an appointed operator, the couriers must manage the urban jungle and make the delivery quickly, efficiently and without notice. However since there is little to no competition for these type of companies, the only real threat they have is an underground group called the Interceptors. Plain and simple, their purpose is to acquire the package before it is delivered and ransom it to the highest bidder. The story writing is done in short chunks, broken up by the passing of time. The entire story happens within an hour and a half and after rewatching The Matrix, feels a lot like Neo running from all the agents toward the end.

The Mediocre Assassin started out as a short story just to write for the sake of writing. I hope to one day turn it into a script for a TV show or podcast radio drama. The story surrounds an average guy, Sherman, who is trying to keep his head above water as his debts pile up. While he is actually a really well trained assassin, he is constantly tested by his bad luck which has kept him out of the top ten list of assassins for years. Being number eleven he is frequently passed the worst of the jobs as the top ten get first pick. His gun repeatedly lets him down and he frequently has to improvise the kill, it has made him quite good at cleaning up the evidence at the scene of a crime however. I just noticed that google docs has butchered the formatting of the original document but it is still readable in its current form. Note to self: Fix that ASAP.

Well that is all for today, hopefully someone out there will give them a pass over (if you haven’t already) and I am on my way to post again on IGN. Wish me luck and I wish you all the best out there!

A New Beginning: Volume 8 in the Life of TJ Edwards

To those of you who know me, you will tend to call me Tim, TJ, Timothy (never Timmy) and I will answer to all of those. However, after getting stir crazy in Australia my mind wandered onto a thought; getting back into writing. it has been quite awhile since I did anything interesting in the realm of writing but I always complained I never had the time. Well since my working holiday visa is putting quite the damper on my career in retail management, I’ve decided to focus on one of my other passions, writing.

Perhaps you’re wondering why this is Volume 8, or why I’ve even classified it as such. I’ve been doing a lot of thinking lately about my life and where I have come from. This has lead me onto researching my family history, to which I traced my Mother’s maiden name as far back as a few spelling changes and into the 1600’s. Also it’s made me think a lot about the direction my life is headed and where I’ve been. In every volume of my life, there has been one constant; My passion for writing and my creativity.

Some people say everything will work out in the end, and perhaps that is the case. I am one of the people who fully believes we are the masters of our own destiny. You would never think that to know me. I’ve always wanted to write, as far back as I could scribble on paper. Classes came and went, I moved up through grades just like any average child. I wrote a lot when I was younger, I definitely had the time. As I matured however writing was still always there, my muse constantly packing my daily dose of creativity. However I sometimes ignored the call, or there was something more important going on. My jobs got in the way, romance, higher education and pretty much anything I gave the time of day to. I started and restarted so many blogs I cannot begin to tell you how many books I’d have written by now if I’d have focused all those efforts.

But now! I have been in Australia for two months and I was relying on my resume as a store manager at multiple different outlets and my record of quick promotions and praise to get me somewhere. However over here, my visa has been the bane of my existence. No one wants an employee for six months, and I cannot even apply for a Spouse Sponsored Visa until May of next year. As it stands, I need to take my destiny by the wheel and make a good use of the free time I have. I’ve already wasted far too much on video games and films. Thus begins the very serious direction of writing and the push I am going to make for it. Reviews, Blog Writing, Articles, I shall do whatever it takes to start on the path to writing as my full time job and me as my own boss.

TJ Edwards